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Alone within others by arghavan Alone within others by arghavan

    A study for a new project. Children's novel.
    All the illustrations (except from the cover) must be in B&W, the book with be published so.

    for me, as a color lover, it's a challenge.


    ( *pen + ink + )': )
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Fantastic!
But I have to say, that you could have done the head (and face) of the girl in the foreground better. It's irritating that the girl has got a wide head (Actually, not bad, but in this, it doesn't look right) and the others in thebackground have got round heads. And the eyes of her are standing a little bit too much apart, don't you agree? That should have been improved. :)
But besides of this, It's brilliant! You managed light and shadow really well and that you used pencil and ink (and no coulours) makes it just better. :D
And then the title: Alone within other. Amazing!
You are in the middle of a classroom, children are playing and having fun. And you are sitting alone, studying. And your only friend is a bird. Which is cute, I just noticed.
Great work! ^^
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whoffarted Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
I love your drawings! This is just perfect for a childrens book. I'm jealous :) 
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OrcOYoyo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
Cute, the bird is hard to spot. Maybe darken the girls shirt in the background a bit where its highlight is all white that could make the bird stand out more.
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arghavan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
hmm, good suggestion, I'll do that. Thanks :w00t:
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arghavan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
hmm, good suggestion, I'll do that. Thanks :w00t:
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claudiocerri Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Cute!
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teddybearcholla Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I can understand, because I love color too! But B&W can be even more powerful, because we don't have the colors to distract us!
Great title and your illustration conveys that "aloneness" very well! :heart:
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SilverTott Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Ohh so cute !!
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